• Devin commented on the post, tasting 7 years, 7 months ago

    Your lips, your tongue
    I’m still waiting for a taste

    after all the years.

    I think it would be sweet.

  • Devin commented on the post, entrée 7 years, 7 months ago

    delicious.
    mouthwatering.
    juicy.
    succulent.
    scintillating.

  • Devin commented on the post, nourish 7 years, 7 months ago

    suck suck suck. all the nourishment out of me.
    fuck fuck fuck. you’re gunna be the death of me.
    and when I’m dead,
    you’ll be full
    and when I’m dead,
    you’ll be full again.

  • Devin commented on the post, puddle 7 years, 8 months ago

    splish splash
    her jeans were soaked. up to her midcalf.
    she didn’t care.
    he was jumping around with her.

  • Devin commented on the post, pins 7 years, 8 months ago

    and needles.

    shiver up my spine. paint the anxiousness on my skin.

  • Devin commented on the post, willful 7 years, 8 months ago

    No.

    I will not.

    My heart will explode with loneliness before I ever let that happen.

  • Devin commented on the post, hood 7 years, 8 months ago

    it fell across his forehead, barely hiding his dark eyes from view. They peeked up at me although his face was turned toward the ground.

  • Devin commented on the post, flip 7 years, 8 months ago

    Flop.

    It turned in and out of my hands. Grasping at the edges of stability yet uncomfortable in settling for anything less than chaos.
    That’s how it always goes.

    Not enough flip, too much flop. And they […]

  • Devin commented on the post, attendant 7 years, 8 months ago

    She walked past me four times. Apparently oblivious to my desires as a paying customer. She didn’t even look in a hurry. So I sat. Thinking she probably had something better to do.

  • Devin commented on the post, charms 7 years, 8 months ago

    His eyes dazzled in the fluorescent lighting. Only overshadowed by his smile as he chuckled at his own joke. It was almost embarrassing, if he wasn’t so flattering.

  • Devin commented on the post, rainy 7 years, 8 months ago

    spit splat.
    spit splat.

    down it comes.
    the spiders run to hide.
    the clouds rumble.

    it is safer outside.

  • Devin commented on the post, drifting 7 years, 8 months ago

    Aimless wandering. Swaying in the wind, pushed and pulled by effervescent yearning. That is what it’s like now that you’re gone.

  • Devin commented on the post, temper 7 years, 8 months ago

    CRASH! The lamp smashed against the wall like droplets of screaming rain hitting pond water.

  • Devin commented on the post, residue 7 years, 8 months ago

    It dripped from the faucet. Aching in its descent to the bottom of the sink bed. One drop escaped from the whole and smacked the steel, SMACK SMACK SMACK. Each drop resounding in a definite loneliness.

  • Devin commented on the post, pageant 7 years, 8 months ago

    The sentiment was unappreciated. “May the best girl win” ha! Like there’s any competition