• Andrea commented on the post, points 2 years, 7 months ago

    Major points. That’s all that was at stake. Arlee didn’t need points, she needed a way out. This place was dismal on its best day. If points were shovels, or better yet, explosives, she’d work at earning them in a heartbeat. It wouldn’t even really be work. She could beat these other yahoos hands down.

  • Andrea commented on the post, middle 3 years, 5 months ago

    Middle. Of. The. Night. That’s when I woke up to someone bustling around my room. I opened my eyes, propped myself up on my elbow to see what was happening. My sister was running around the room like a mad person, grabbing everything in sight and packing it into a suticase.

  • Andrea commented on the post, savings 3 years, 8 months ago

    He emptied his savings. Every last penny. It was worth it to him though. She was worth it. Having her by his side meant everything. Not having her at his side…well, he might as well face death himself if he couldn’t have her by his side. He loved her. He hoped she felt the same.

  • Andrea commented on the post, planter 6 years, 10 months ago

    She sat along the row of planters. The sun was hot and causing a light sheen of sweat upon her skin. Deep in thought she was startled by a sudden scream from the other side of the fence.

  • Andrea commented on the post, overt 6 years, 11 months ago

    She had an overt sense of responsibility, that girl. Always looking out for her parents and her friends. She took it too far one day. A stranger showed up. He seemed harmless and helpless, and she just couldn’t let him fend for himself.

  • Andrea commented on the post, ancient 7 years ago

    The city was ancient. It was spectacular and bustling with people. The colors were bright and moving like a live motion painting. I thought that I could stand here all day and just watch the people. I could learn the history of this ancient and modern city just from watching the flow of life through the streets. Then someone grabbed my shoulder…[Read more]

  • Andrea commented on the post, sustain 7 years, 5 months ago

    I don’t know how I can sustain this level of sadness without cracking. It’s an inevitable part of life. Unavoidable. All I can do is keep my eyes up and remind myself of who I am and where I’m going.

  • Andrea commented on the post, seeds 7 years, 8 months ago

    He planted seeds of jealousy in her mind. The rage, the hate, it all stemmed from the words and feelings he suggested. She lost control, and then he was the one she took it out on.

  • Andrea commented on the post, seeds 7 years, 8 months ago

    Her love was like the seeds sown in a flower garden. It grew, it took root, it blossomed, but then it came and went with the seasons. He could not seem to keep it.

  • Andrea commented on the post, framework 7 years, 8 months ago

    I tried to keep things within the framework of reality. It was difficult, considering who I was dealing with. “Let me try to put this to you in a different way so that you can understand”, I said. “You cannot […]

  • Andrea commented on the post, switching 7 years, 8 months ago

    Switching roles was difficult. The understudy had waited his whole career for this part, but now that it was staring him in the face, he wasn’t sure he could do it. He feared failure. Little did he know that […]

  • Andrea commented on the post, couch 8 years, 5 months ago

    He was sitting on the couch, drinking his coffee. “I wonder how she will pull this off”, he said to himself. He’d been trying to figure it out for hours. She was such a mystery to him, and how she was going to pull off this scheme was even more mysterious.

  • Andrea commented on the post, despair 8 years, 9 months ago

    He looked on in despair. How was he going to reach his family? They were ripped from him like paper through a shredder. He began to plot his course and headed North. He believed they might be in a compound there.