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It was the perfect setting. The sun was shining down on the cool winter morning, there was a gentle breeze that rippled through the trees.Alice sat back and thought: ‘this is the place, this is where i’m getting married.’
» Posted By Maddie On 10.06.2011 @ 12:28 pm
i was once a small little elf who loved to play on the reindeers playground. i wasnt supposed to be there because the current civil war between the elf workers and santa and his ever so loyal reindeers. anyways i was playing there one day and ran into an odd fellow with a corn cobb pipe and a button nose who gave me an idea on how to commandeer the playground all for myself…
» Posted By Maddie On 09.27.2011 @ 10:55 pm
I remember one night in the begining of summer when my lover took me to a playground at night. We ran to the swinsets and watched our feet soar into the stars then he held me in his arms as we listened to grasshoppers and we spilled our hearts out to each other. That is what i remember about my lover.
» Posted By maddie On 09.27.2011 @ 6:40 pm
i’ve managed to convince myself of so many things as of late: that i never loved you, that i don’t care about what could have, and what should have, been; that i am content, happy even, without you in my life. but it’s all false hope. simply illusions. Soon i will realize how much i have been lying to myself.
» Posted By maddie On 09.23.2011 @ 8:19 pm
A place to sit when you are feeling lazy. A place to watch t.v. and eat chips. When you feel tired after a long day at work it can be a place to relax.
» Posted By maddie On 09.22.2011 @ 6:45 am
I sat on the couch wondering where to look next. I had been staring at my hands for over a minute now and I could feel myself beginning to twitch in anticipation. Should I look at their faces across the room? No. They would see right through my facade. Should I tell them the truth? No. I couldn’t.
» Posted By Maddie On 09.21.2011 @ 2:39 pm
i crouched down behind the bush, heart pounding in my ears, desperately trying to hold my breath. my lungs are sore and i have sweat forming above my brow and under my arms. i think i lost him.
» Posted By maddie On 09.20.2011 @ 3:57 pm
This is a shootout. You fire one shot at my heart and i fire one straight back. We are allies, torn apart by feelings. We are soldiers suffering from PTSD, and this shootout will determine all. So take your best shot.
» Posted By Maddie On 09.18.2011 @ 2:58 am
the thing about me is that i’m so average. i’ve never amounted to anything in my life and probably never will. i get average grades. average income. average friends. average clothes. average life. average. average. average. i’m nothing special.
» Posted By maddie On 09.15.2011 @ 7:38 pm
I was sitting at the prep rally, when all of a sudden, out of the blue I see him. He is standing on the sidelines watching me. Our eyes meet. I look away. I can’t bring myself to look at him again. When i look back, he is gone, the moment is gone. It’s gone, but at least it happened.
» Posted By Maddie On 09.14.2011 @ 9:56 am
rally up the crowd to get the beat up they love the vibe and you love the
» Posted By Maddie On 09.14.2011 @ 9:04 am
A really is almost like a fight. It’s a battle. It’s a debate. It’s about getting one or many voices out in the open. It’s about opinions and messages. It’s about standing up for what you believe in. A rally is a protest. And battle that goes back and forth and back and forth.
» Posted By Maddie On 09.14.2011 @ 3:55 am
He was a distinguished sort of gentleman. He wore his moustache with pride, occasionally lifting a finger to smooth it over his lips after a coughing fit. Suddenly it occurred to me, what a terrible loss this would be, as I turned out his lights.
» Posted By Maddie On 09.11.2011 @ 8:31 am
The taste of pepper was still in my mouth. I’m strange like that- I like lot’s and lot’s and lot’s of pepper. I’ve never found anyone who liked pepper as much as me.
Except for him.
And now, I can’t eat it without thinking about him.
» Posted By Maddie On 09.04.2011 @ 9:15 am
His mind was a sponge, absorbing any and all information he could. He worked day and night, trying and succeeding in learning every last word definition in the English Dictionary. This was his life, and he hated it.
» Posted By Maddie On 09.02.2011 @ 3:39 am
The mist shrouded the figure- it was a pearly white, like an angle. It reached its arm out. “Come.” It said, slowly, quietly. He had too. She was so mesmerizing. He took a step forward. She said, “Come.” again, softer and more pleasant. He took another step.
» Posted By Maddie On 08.29.2011 @ 7:39 pm
‘Please, give me one more chance!’ I screamed at him as he pushed me out of his apartment. This was it. It was over between us. I messed up one time too many, and sleeping with his brother was the final straw. I missed my chance once before, i won’t miss it again.
» Posted By Maddie On 08.29.2011 @ 5:55 am
Destruction. Such a simple word. but such an devastating one too. You can destroy relationships, friendships, people, and nature. Which one is worst?
» Posted By Maddie On 08.26.2011 @ 4:17 pm
All around her was destruction. She had forgotten the one rule that the Order had. The one regulation to protect the mortals. She had taken off her rings, her regulatory rings. All around her were people dying, buildings falling, and children lying on the ground. She sighed, picked up her rings and moved on. One city down, thousands more to go.
» Posted By Maddie On 08.26.2011 @ 3:48 pm
Force is they type of thing that comes with power; people will always try to force you to do stuff. Whether it be lying, cheating, blackmailing, or just telling some one you hate them, it can be cruel. But it doesn’t always work. Love is more powerful than force.
» Posted By Maddie On 08.25.2011 @ 6:19 pm
the umbrella opened in a flutter of colors. all of the sudden it seemed as if my whole world had transformed. standing under the umbrella i felt safe, like nothing could get me, like all of my fears, all of the things i had been running from this past year just bounced off of the umbrella with all the raindrops. Trickling down, falling off, and just getting washed down the drain.
» Posted By Maddie On 08.24.2011 @ 8:30 pm
today, my cousin Monica got an umbrella for her birthday. It was maroon and white with the harvard emblem on it. it was 56 inches in diameter so it was quite large.
» Posted By Maddie On 08.24.2011 @ 8:21 pm
I stared out the glass doors at the thunderstorm. The rain dancing off of the pavement. I sighed, put on my coat, and stepped outside. I opened my umbrella and I made my way home amidst the fog, lightning and rain.
» Posted By Maddie On 08.24.2011 @ 11:19 am
Her voice was like silk, velvet, every luxurious fabric you could think of. She sang lullabies with hidden meanings, codes for me to pick up, but i missed them. I was transfixed. My ears listened as the melody soared past her lips into the air.
» Posted By Maddie On 08.23.2011 @ 1:49 pm
My heart was sinking the longer i sat there. The longer i stared at that ring on her finger, the deeper into depths of despair i fell. The longer i stared into your eyes, looking for unhappiness, the less i saw a trace of it.
» Posted By Maddie On 08.22.2011 @ 2:06 pm
dead people, poison ivy, trees, snakes,
» Posted By Maddie On 08.22.2011 @ 10:07 am
She drank the lurid, green liquid, fell to the floor, unconscious. Of course, that’s what would’ve happened if things had gone to plan, but no, my incompetent accomplice has failed. The poison is lost.
» Posted By Maddie On 08.21.2011 @ 2:48 pm
Penetrating through your entire body like a curse
An oily substance
It attacks every part of you
Suck it out. Suck the poison out
Once it has been sucked out, it’s gone
» Posted By Maddie On 08.21.2011 @ 12:46 pm
Snake bitten fear crosses his face as the young man witnesses his childhood friend fall to the ground in agony, crying out for help, but the young man is frozen in snake bitten fear.
» Posted By Maddie On 08.21.2011 @ 12:37 pm
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Suddenly he was transported to another realm. He saw nothing but trees, greenery and foliage. He peered around the branches, searches for a glimmer of her presence, the only thing keeping him going.
» Posted By Maddie On 08.20.2011 @ 5:58 pm