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hawks fly above us in a way that we all want to, you know, be free. just like holden caulfield wanted to be young
also theres this really annoying phenom sweeping chicago and its all i ever fucking hear about from the adults i’m supposed to look up to,…hawks zombies. kil me now please!!!!! i hate hockey fans.

» Posted By becky On 06.08.2010 @ 1:47 pm


so beautiful. how your bones fit so perfect. the way the skin stretches over.

» Posted By Becky On 05.28.2010 @ 3:41 pm


filling, two slices of bread, any number of fillings between. sweet or savory. versatile, won’t get your hands dirty, invented by someone wanting to continue gambling

» Posted By becky On 05.21.2010 @ 1:09 pm


Smog and slime churning from the exhaust pipes, oozing into the water and onto the land. Little creatures scamper and hide as they watch those left behind suffer.

» Posted By Becky On 04.28.2010 @ 4:50 pm


Blocks, falling one by one from the sky. Different shapes, different colors, coming one right after the other. I try to stop them from piling up, flipping them in every direction I can think of. They come together nicely until the final piece, a horrible blue “z”. It’s an outcast; the other blocks won’t have anything to do with it. With the one little block, I’ve lost my chance at victory.

» Posted By Becky On 04.26.2010 @ 7:52 pm

every time i think see the word blocks i think of the fact that i used to hate the toys i was given to play with as a child. they were never REAL blocks, only little cardboard ones that gave nasty paper cuts. it was utterly stupid of me to ever give those things a chance, but i did anyway. go figure it was a child’s naive behavior to give such a thing a chance.

» Posted By becky On 04.26.2010 @ 11:27 am


i have a dress that I just got from my mom, it’s black and sparkly. but i don’t know when I will have the chance to wear it. Oh well,. it’s really nice anyways. Do you have a dress? when i get a job I want to collect dresses. They’re reeally nice. I seen one that was blue with a black r

» Posted By Becky On 05.18.2010 @ 1:14 pm


“Why can’t I be like that?” she whispered, looking at the girl with the sleek blonde hair that seemed to cup her face as delicately as a tea cup.
“Because you don’t have the blood lines,” Melanie whispered back.
“Don’t compare me to an animal. That’s improper,” I snapped back.

» Posted By Becky On 05.12.2010 @ 8:58 pm


Sweeping fingers
across a body
with it’s sandy skin
and it’s exceptional smoothness
and I sit here and write
about a love that I’ve forgotten

» Posted By becky On 05.01.2009 @ 11:00 pm


I dislike rude, and disruptive people. Many teens and preteens today are rude and feel we owe them. They are in for a rude awakening. We owe them nothing and they are going to be responisble.

» Posted By becky On 04.29.2009 @ 6:57 pm


The photo was a glossy black and white. It showed her large eyes. She was beautiful. She would turn heads wherever she went. Her blonde hair was almost white.

» Posted By becky On 04.28.2009 @ 8:00 pm


The gentle breeze blew in the window. I stretched and opened my eyes to sunshine. It was long past time to get up. I had a lot to accomplish today.

» Posted By becky On 04.27.2009 @ 5:21 pm


What is your name young man? I don’t seem to recall it?
It’s Benny, Grandma, I’ve been here before. I come everyday to make sure you are okay.
That’s nice of you. What did you say your name was?

» Posted By becky On 04.26.2009 @ 3:28 pm


to draw something on paper, the only thing that brings your hand alive. you draw, write. you renew things. edit with your ink. red ink for the angry. blue ink for the mellow. black ink for the saddened. ink to renew your love.

» Posted By becky On 05.16.2009 @ 7:05 pm

The ink was barely dry on the agreement when there was a commotion outside the door. It burst open and in came Emma Mayes in all her redheaded glory. She was fuming. You could almost see the steam coming out her ears.

» Posted By Becky On 05.16.2009 @ 11:24 am


The meter was running and the cab was stuck in traffic. I still had fifteen minutes to make it to my meeting. I reached into my purse for my cell phone. I wanted Monty to start the presentation.

» Posted By Becky On 05.13.2009 @ 7:17 pm


I would offer my heart to him if only he would accept it and offer me his in turn. I’d like to imagine that he would… when we meet.

» Posted By Becky On 05.12.2009 @ 9:00 pm


Solstice– I suppose because it is that day on the calendar. It makes me think of solitaire and being solitary– but in a very happy way. I feel happy. Solar– that’s where solstice comes from, I’m sure.

» Posted By Becky On 12.21.2008 @ 8:22 pm


i want to go home, because that is where i belong. i also belong at college. and i belong with my friends. and i belong sleeping in my bed, oh i want to sleep in my bed right now. I belong in times square on new years eve. behind my camera.

» Posted By becky On 12.14.2008 @ 5:56 pm


lock the lock. there is a lock around my heart, will your key fit? someones key fits but who’s? I am so alone, i need to find someone to unlock my heart, my secrets, someone to share my heart and life with.

» Posted By Becky On 01.30.2009 @ 3:29 pm

lock yourself in, lock yourself out. let your self be free and let your self find itself. do not lock yourself into itself, leave the door wide open and explore, then come home and find what is new, or simply rediscover what is old.

» Posted By becky On 01.28.2009 @ 2:11 pm


she sits on her throne, miserly and alone.

when’s the queen gonna die already?

it’s cold and the top and no one knows it but me.

stupid freakin’ pea.

» Posted By becky On 01.26.2009 @ 2:45 pm


barack obama, what about it, not seeing it, something that happens different from the past, civil rights, women’s rights, techonolgy, personality, my life, my beliefs, and i don’t really know what else, everything changes all the time thats it

» Posted By Becky On 01.20.2009 @ 12:15 pm


As I danced in the moonlight, the shadows looked exquisite on the cobble stone floor.
I thought about all the times I had come here for my midnight dance, and I wept. I would miss it.

» Posted By Becky On 01.20.2009 @ 2:04 am


The veins and arteries of the victim were full of antifreeze. A terrible way to die, I’m sure you’ll agree. Whoever did this was a sick and twisted individual.

» Posted By Becky On 01.15.2009 @ 12:53 pm

veins are always showing in your legs. it is not fun to have vericose veins because everyone can see them and i think that people think that they are a sign of being overweight, but i think that people can’t help that they have veins. veins are an everyday part of life and you just have to deal with them. however, i guess you can get your vericose veins removed if you want.

» Posted By becky On 01.14.2009 @ 2:00 pm


finite means the opposite of infinite. I had this word in tenth grade as a vocabulary word and I pronounced fin-it…luckily no one ever knew that I didn’t know how to pronounce it. I think a lot of things in the world are finite…like, my time and my resources. I have a finite amount of patience for people, even though I tend to think of myself as a patient person. I also have a finite amount of times that I can see the same movie in a certain amount of time (usually I can’t watch a movie more than 3 or 4 times in one year), or eat the same food in a given week. I have a finite amount of words that I can use to describe finite also…

» Posted By Becky On 01.08.2009 @ 2:05 pm


the light flutter of her kiss on the cheek awakened him. He could hardly take his eye off her. She was a goddess. Long blonde hair to her waist, lithe body, yes a goddess.

» Posted By Becky On 04.03.2009 @ 4:13 pm

this is what i feel when i see your face, gaze into your eyes and our hearts connect. My whole being melts like butter. I am yours and You are mine.
the flutter make my life amazing i love you

» Posted By becky On 04.03.2009 @ 12:18 pm


the fingerprints stood out in the flour on the kitchen counter. Whoever had been here was not being careful. What would we encounter as we went farther into the house?

» Posted By Becky On 04.02.2009 @ 5:41 pm

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