Comments Posted By Gabrielle

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spider

creepy crawly up my spine i’ll reach to find you crawl upon my pillow in the very damp of tonight, you eight-legged beast.

» Posted By gabrielle On 01.19.2011 @ 11:28 pm

lucky

ducks float across the river. wading and wondering sticking their heads below the surface to find some semblance of escape. nodding in and out of a world that renders them insignificant, they try to prove their incredible worth. the quack and feathers are irreplaceable and they strive to create a dream world that needs them. they are the lucky ones.

» Posted By gabrielle On 12.28.2010 @ 10:34 am

to be lucky, would be to have you, hold you, and caress your beautiful face. but alas, lucky i am not.

» Posted By gabrielle On 12.27.2010 @ 8:57 pm

bunny

i’ma go hop around like this here bunny before i get it and i’ll be gooooooood but i’m so sorry if i sell it to the man who kills it.

rip

» Posted By gabrielle On 12.02.2010 @ 1:00 pm

market

Life, vibrance, people, noise, sound and color. Bringing products, exchanging and bartering. Lifeblood and livelihood. Cloth, food, jewelry, animals.

» Posted By Gabrielle On 11.14.2010 @ 10:33 am

shore

I stood on the shore looking out into the murky waters. From the note I received in the mail and the way I knew his thought process worked, I knew her body would wash up eventually.

» Posted By Gabrielle On 10.25.2010 @ 5:13 pm

weeks

the weeks take longer than the years. my friend says that, and how it is true. weeks seem to take so long. but in the long run, it went so fast and we miss it all.

» Posted By gabrielle On 10.24.2010 @ 4:21 pm

costume

He stared at me, licking his lips with a shit eating grin from ear to ear. “Put it on,” he said, practically jumping out of his skin. I glanced at the costume, a simple piece of string, then looked back up at him, “how?”

» Posted By Gabrielle On 10.20.2010 @ 8:46 pm

table

i’ll sit upon you
on a lovely day
just to stare at the sky
wooden grooves

» Posted By gabrielle On 10.19.2010 @ 10:09 pm

She used both her arms to hurriedly clear the table. She turned around and pointed at the man standing in the doorway. “You. Here.Now.”

» Posted By Gabrielle On 10.19.2010 @ 5:49 pm

bear

woops. times up. well i’m cheating…..
bear beets battle star gallactica! the office much? can’t help it.

i’m wrong i’m right i’m raw i’m rough

» Posted By gabrielle On 10.14.2010 @ 7:44 pm

tale

Fairy tales do not exist. They are a figment of our imagination. Every young girl wishes to have this special fairy tale come true by the end of her life but it never will.

» Posted By Gabrielle On 10.03.2010 @ 5:49 pm

i wrote a tale of two lovers and a

stop la la la la lying.

» Posted By gabrielle On 10.03.2010 @ 11:25 am

schedule

as i sit here in the dark,

i’ve got to fix things and put them in little tiny boxes as to really show and inspect it. make sure they all blend well or it’s a rocky road ice cream cone with a surprise ending and a cherry on top.

» Posted By gabrielle On 09.28.2010 @ 10:12 pm

motel

for some reason motels always seemed so frightening and unsafe to me. I am not sure what gave motels such a negative connotation, in my mind, of course. They really give me anxiety. Also i can’t help but think about the low grade, kinky, spontaneous, rushed, unfaithful sexual acts that have occurred there.

» Posted By gabrielle On 09.19.2010 @ 3:20 pm

cousin

i miss you girl, i really do. i miss you boy, i miss you too. i miss you liv and d and k, even you sam. am i forgetting anyone?

» Posted By gabrielle On 09.05.2010 @ 12:06 pm

trees

The fall air makes them whisper and crinkle. They sit on top of the steep hill, overlooking the dozens of cars that pass beneath them, bearing students who dawdle and dream.

» Posted By gabrielle On 09.01.2010 @ 6:05 pm

moon

I wanted it to be full, but it was always slightly off. It was always missing that little sliver on the edge, the final piece. it was never complete, only partial. I never saw a full one. It escaped, it evaded, it might not have ever existed.

» Posted By gabrielle On 08.27.2010 @ 11:11 pm

flashback

eyes squeezed shut, hair blown back. black. hurricane. when i flash back, and the world falls slack, will you be there?

» Posted By Gabrielle On 08.09.2010 @ 4:08 pm

near

fight the urge but i feel the surge running through my veins. the end isnear? no no, it’s only the beginning little bee. a life filled with exxstacy

» Posted By gabrielle On 07.29.2010 @ 9:48 pm

maid

All I can think about is the French maid from Clue. In High School my friend Kileen played the part of her — garters the whole nine with the costume and all. Lets just say after the play she was extremely popular.

» Posted By Gabrielle On 07.27.2010 @ 10:03 pm

complete

you eat me whole eat my soul feel my complex curves down your throat as you chew your green grass like an ass.

» Posted By gabrielle On 07.25.2010 @ 12:26 am

driven

she was driven to drink before, back when things where darker. but now she was driven to dance. driven to run. driven to see something better. because she’d fixed herself, and she would never, ever let herself go back to the dark.

» Posted By Gabrielle On 07.23.2010 @ 10:03 am

Driven, people lack drive. They get lazy and think things will come to them. You have to want it. You need to be driven.

» Posted By Gabrielle On 07.22.2010 @ 6:12 pm

up until today ive never been driven to leave. id thought about it, dreamt, planned, schemed. but up until tonight, before my face was covered in blood, before the bottles were drained, i couldnt ever do it.

i wish i had sooner

» Posted By Gabrielle On 07.22.2010 @ 6:10 pm

vase

I picked up the vase and then looked at Jackson. He was sneering at me, ready for a fight. So I chucked it at his melon sized head. He ducked and screamed, ” are you crazy woman!” I smiled and said yes.

» Posted By Gabrielle On 07.20.2010 @ 11:28 pm

commit

Janice sat across from Stewart, she couldn’t believe he was telling their therapist that he was blaming his cheating on not being able to commit. It was more than that.

» Posted By Gabrielle On 07.19.2010 @ 12:20 pm

element

blatantly butchering the moon that once shone upon this element standing tall now, not so small now, watch it

» Posted By gabrielle On 07.16.2010 @ 11:15 am

pleased

fill me up with your goeey gumdropping nectar and i’m a werewolf in the full moon

» Posted By gabrielle On 07.14.2010 @ 9:14 pm

lease

give it to me! why? why above anyone else do you deserve it? because i do, i cook, i clean, i make you happy don’t i? no, you make me miserable. just give it to me! i can’t… i cannot do that woman. i’ll give you nothin

» Posted By gabrielle On 07.13.2010 @ 7:48 pm

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