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The level was set. It would be perfect now that it matched the horizon. Pretty difficult to have it perfect. They were glad with it.
» Posted By Edt On 08.03.2011 @ 11:41 pm
the ticket lay in her hands. She looked onto the track, wondering when it was she would escape. With a quick look behind her, she willed the train to come. Soon, she would get away. Soon, she would be free.Soon she would forget the person who lurked around the corner, looking at her escape for freedom
» Posted By Edt On 07.22.2011 @ 1:35 pm
the megaphone was heard from miles away. the speech had been made. everyone heard. all that was left now, was for the monster to make it over the hill. the ground shook as it made its way to the populace. what were they to do now?
» Posted By Edt On 07.20.2011 @ 9:27 am
it stemmed from a source far from where anyone had been. From a place hidden from all, a place secret to all that wanted to know.
» Posted By Edt On 07.05.2011 @ 11:22 am
The honest one got up…No one knew he was. He just kept it to himself. Everyone looked past him like he was just everyone else. But not everyone was capable of doing what he did.
» Posted By Edt On 07.01.2011 @ 8:56 am
morals are non-existent in my town. to be able to show love by stealing it from someone doesn’t make it love at the end of the day. to destroy someone else’s life so that the people they know are also robbed shows decay. morals. a very powerful notion
» Posted By Edt On 06.27.2011 @ 9:08 am
The history lay in the books…the books full of dust. Neglected and kept too long within the reach of the sun’s rays. One day someone will pick up the book and learn what was long forgotten in the old and torn pages.
» Posted By Edt On 06.23.2011 @ 10:39 pm
he intense moment had passed, leaving all the people in confusion and anger. It was supposed to have been better, but they didn’t even try. They ran off into a different place, waiting for the intensity once more.
» Posted By Edt On 06.22.2011 @ 12:49 pm
It was predicted with the rising sun. And written in the rain. That the day would come when the leaves would find their way through the ground and bring life to the desert plain. It was written in the air and it was felt in the wind.
» Posted By Edt On 06.21.2011 @ 9:28 am
It was held in the hands of the most eldest of them all. They looked at it, wondering what would happen in the next couple of days. They did not know where it came from or what would be done…he would tell them…and then they would see how it would happen, now it was found.
» Posted By Edt On 06.20.2011 @ 1:26 am
They all stood in wonder at the sky. It was red and yellow and what came towards them was something more sinister than the sun or just a passing comet…whatever it was, it headed straight for them and the world was in silence as they saw it approaching. Today they would know.
» Posted By Edt On 06.17.2011 @ 2:24 pm
The smile lasted only for a second. Anger seemed to consume her as she found her way out of the woods. She would have never believed it could have happened. Someone was going to pay for it…someone had done something really wrong.
» Posted By Edt On 06.16.2011 @ 7:37 pm
The train left the station, headed off to a land that was empty and filled with sorrow. The passengers were prepared for what lay ahead, but were still unhappy with what they would meet. It would no longer matter where they came from, so long as they went for the journey.
» Posted By Edt On 06.15.2011 @ 8:01 pm
The station was empty except for a figure a long way down the track. It didn’t look human and it didn’t look kind. It walked nearer and nearer towards where the people would walk in an hour…It could have been death’s shadow…
» Posted By Edt On 06.14.2011 @ 7:07 pm
He was embraced, but felt no comfort or love. He did not know that the arms that held him were what kept him safe. He looked off into the distance, wondering where he could be if he were not here. He let go and walked away, but they didn’t, they just waited silently for him to come back.
» Posted By Edt On 06.13.2011 @ 9:56 pm
The beloved pillow lay on the ground, neglected. She had not used it in months. All the comfort she found in it was no longer there. She sobbed next to the window, instead. A sob no one cared for. The pillow remained clean on the corner…
» Posted By Edt On 06.12.2011 @ 7:27 pm
The funeral was a quiet sight. All the people who knew him were in deep silence and no one said what they wanted to say. No, he never was a good man, and no one regretted his death. They merely showed up and walked away.
» Posted By Edt On 06.11.2011 @ 6:40 pm
The sunrise spread an orange and pink over the land. The ground awoke: the birds singing in their trees and animals taking a look from their homes. It was the start of a beautiful day.
» Posted By Edt On 06.10.2011 @ 11:38 pm
The teacher looked out into the class and surveyed the students in front of her, seeing a wonderful mix of people from everywhere.
» Posted By Edt On 06.09.2011 @ 9:08 pm
Forgetting her in her dark dreams, dreams made by life, dreams made by hate…they ran, not knowing what they left behind or that it was more precious and pure than they would ever know.
» Posted By Edt On 06.07.2011 @ 8:06 pm
The plaid skirt reached her knees. She looked at the red, blue and green colors and thought of what would happen in school when the other girls would have a glimpse at the horrible skirt she had to wear. Her shoes looked odd too, but that was just part of being who she was.
» Posted By Edt On 06.06.2011 @ 5:41 am
On the chalkboard was the math problem that he solved. It took him a while, but he managed to do it in less than three tries. The people at the back of the room sneered and coughed, wishing they were the one’s to have seen how to find the solution to Einstien’s problem.
» Posted By Edt On 06.05.2011 @ 8:05 am
The radio played a classic tune. For the barman, it reminded him of his daughter. The policeman who sat on the bar drifted off to his days as a rookie. An old woman sitting alone in the corner thought of the day she first met her recently deceased husband of fifty years.
» Posted By Edt On 06.03.2011 @ 9:29 pm
The limo pulled up to the casino. They looked at the lights and buildings, wondering if today would be their lucky day. With a round of shots of tequilla, they pulled themselves together and walked ahead to see what lady luck had in store for them.
» Posted By Edt On 06.03.2011 @ 12:14 am
His backpack overflowed with all he’d need for the journey. Extra clothes, some snacks and plenty of water (among other things). He didn’t quite know where he was going, only that he had to go. An adventure lay ahead of him, to which he could never know the outcome.
» Posted By Edt On 06.02.2011 @ 7:26 am
On his wall was a montage of all he had done with his life. His eyes lingered on the woman with the hat and smile. He looked away immediately, unwilling to feel what was just a shadow of regret.
» Posted By Edt On 05.31.2011 @ 10:14 pm
the mint in the desert was comforting after all the different flavors from the main course. With ice cream, it tasted superb.
» Posted By Edt On 05.28.2011 @ 7:26 am
the smell from the canteen brought in the people swarming in from their days work. it was a small canteen, but people were nourished by what was there. The chef gave a smile as someone thanked him for the great lasagna.
» Posted By Edt On 05.27.2011 @ 4:33 am
The torch was the light for all the people as darkness fell. It’s fire was tremendous, leaving people with warmth when the sun left to come back another day.
» Posted By Edt On 05.26.2011 @ 1:10 am
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superman put on his cape in the booth and went off
» Posted By Edt On 05.25.2011 @ 10:51 am