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it was small and round just sitting there like it had nothing better to do. if it did there would have been something like an explosion because this dot had always been friends with a cheeta. how do you know this dot was just a dot and not an imaginary one? because it was hanging out at the end of a sentence. the lonely kind you see just sitting there at the butt end of every one.

» Posted By Becca On 07.25.2013 @ 7:43 pm


the way he looekd at everything unsettled her. He looked at everything – his priest, his teacers, his books, his television, abso-goddamn-lutely everything – with the sott of disdain most people reserved for gum o ntheir shoe. it was unsettling, because he was the most respectufyl little shit she had ever me too.

» Posted By Becca On 07.23.2013 @ 2:23 pm


tumbling reminds me of kindergarten. summersaults … sommersalts… you know what i mean. there is also i’ll tumble for ya i’ll tumle for ya i’ll tumble for ya …. boy george. man i loved him back in the day. i thought he was so sexy.

» Posted By becca On 06.19.2013 @ 12:30 am


I don’t understand why people obsess over coach bags. I think it’s simply a self-confidence thing as is purchasing any name brand. I thought about that earlier. I mean, the only reason I want to dress nice is to be confident about my self and make those around me see my approach-ability and the fact that I want to make them desire that sort of confidence for themselves as well and that it’s attainable! That’s why we desire this type of self expression in the first place I think. If I had money to pursue it I would. In a heart beat.

» Posted By Becca On 06.10.2013 @ 1:46 pm


It was wrong she knew. But she couldn’t help it. She had this huge urge to turn her step brother around and kiss him. To press herself into him as their lips urgently mingled, hungrily. But in the end I stopped myself just as he crossed the threshold of the door way. “And cut!” The director yelled. I walk over to the refreshments table to grab a quick bite before the next take. This movie sure is strange, but if it will help jump start my career I should be grateful.Whats that saying? Any work is good work.

» Posted By Becca On 05.14.2013 @ 9:22 pm


Bubbles form as I lather my hands over and over again. I refuse to stop because I am afraid of what will happen once I wash the soap off and dry my hands with the towel. I dont want to turn the door knob. I dont want to open the door. I dont want to walk out into…..

*Game show host voice* All right folks its time to choose your own ending. Is she…

A) Kidnapped and doesn’t want to face her abductor
B) About to get married
C) Trying to stall having to make an important business presentation
D) At her very first art gallery opening
E) A total germaphobe who is afraid of the world
F) A teenage girl who has random writing mood swings that switch her from dramatic to cheesy in a millisecond.

If you guessed that the writer was F you are correct

*Buzzers ding as lights flash and audiences cheer. A gorgeous supermodel sashays out to hand you your grand prize.*

» Posted By Becca On 05.09.2013 @ 12:32 pm


These stories I hide,
They stay inside,
The pain
I keep it to myself
These stories
They hide
The abandonment
The rape
The cut
The kill
These Stories I hide
My destruction
My demise

» Posted By Becca On 05.06.2013 @ 5:33 pm


My life was a mess. My longtime boyfriend had just left me, my druggie sister was back in town, and I had been passed over on my manuscript again. I was looking for peace, for harmony. I needed some of that in my life. I needed to simplify.

» Posted By Becca On 05.08.2013 @ 12:20 pm


i dissolved the substance in the water to make the crazy concoction that would prove that i could cure cancer. i can fix any disease ever. just by dissolving a few chemicals together, i can fix the world.

» Posted By Becca On 05.02.2013 @ 12:35 pm

The words fade from my brain, the perfect story slipping away from my finger tips. Its as if someone had taken those unwritten pages full of yet to be created stories and threw them in a tank of water. And now I’m left to watch them d i s s o l v e

» Posted By Becca On 05.01.2013 @ 7:27 pm


Their swords clashed and clanged, metal against metal in the ultimate test of strength. But on the outside it was merely rumors spread and nasty whispered comments. It felt like war, but it was only high school.

» Posted By Becca On 04.30.2013 @ 8:50 am


Their souls are as dark as their long slim bodies. A sign of misfortune and death for many. Ominous. *Dramatic music stops* But what if that isn’t their fault? What if at night a crow dreams of dying his hair cotton candy pink of bright fuschia? We should weep for the crows and their dreadful hair. THat is wht you should all donate to the Dye-The-Crows Foundation. Call 1-800-DYE-CROW

» Posted By Becca On 04.29.2013 @ 9:28 am


“Ugh,” I think as a struggle with the clasp on my necklace, “Why won’t this stupid thing work.” Tonight is the first big gala since I began my position as one of Ms. Joster’s assistants, and the fate of this gala will also decide the fate of the rest of my career. Finally my hands stop shaking enough for me to hook the clasp. I glance at my self once more in the mirror, smooth my dress, reapply my lipstick, and grab my keys as I close my apartment door behind me.

» Posted By Becca On 04.28.2013 @ 4:25 am


The café is great,
The café is grand,
My thinking place.
My love,
My life.
Be free little me,
Live with hope Little me,
My café
My peaceful place.

» Posted By Becca On 04.22.2013 @ 12:05 pm


Metro Metropolis
Destroy it all
Break it down
Shatter the walls
Metro Metropolis
Kill them all
Take the happiness
Ruin the peace
Make them suffer
Pay they will
Nothings perfect
Nothing works
Nothing survives
Not even
Metro Metropolis

» Posted By Becca On 04.19.2013 @ 12:53 pm


Always that blinking light. Why doesn’t it understand that I dont have time to check my god damn engine, I have a deadline in 2 days and uncooperative sources. I flick my cigarette butt out the window and continue down the long highway. I roll down the windows to erase the smell of the smoke, hoping it will also blow away my sins and sorrows.

» Posted By Becca On 04.10.2013 @ 8:06 am


THey entangle and ensnare innocent crops, squeezing the life out of them. They only have one mission, thrive and compress, thrive and compress. Like a boa constrictor, they eliminate others without mercy. But I suppose the more apt analogy is a tank; cold and unfeeling. Neither of them realize the multitudes of lives they tank. THey act without a second thought. Without any thought at all.

» Posted By Becca On 04.04.2013 @ 12:03 pm

Entangling the crops, squeezing the life out of them like a boa constrictor. They have no mercy, no compassion, no soul. THeir only purpose is to thrive and strangle, thrive and strangle. They are the same as tanks, taking thousands of innocent lives without a second thought. Without a thought at all. For they are mindless. They have no idea of the havoc they wreak.

» Posted By Becca On 04.04.2013 @ 11:54 am


the center of my judiasm. How many times has my Dad dragged me to a Deli to have lunch with my grandma, or shoved one piled with lox at me in the morning. But really, to me all it is is nourishment. My real connection to my family and religion is far more complex than a bagel. Or is it?

» Posted By Becca On 04.03.2013 @ 11:53 am


A dreadful disease, kills all. Does not discriminate against race, religion, or money. It steals the lives of all. The one true unbiased member in a completely discriminatory world.

» Posted By Becca On 03.31.2013 @ 8:14 pm


Cities are dirty. They are full of smoke and garbage and exhaust. And people. So many people. They are full of crime and hate. Cities are ugly. But they are also full of love, and that makes them somehow beautiful.

» Posted By Becca On 03.17.2013 @ 8:05 pm


I had just
Returned from the store.
My arms
were loaded with grocery bags.
My key stuck
in the lock and
I struggled to pull it out.
Pushing open the door
I found him there.
Lying on the floor.

» Posted By Becca On 03.07.2013 @ 7:37 pm


He is someone who is loving, supportive and married , not only to females but males as well. I think husbands should be good fathers and that they do not necessarily need to be the sole breadwinner or main wage earner. A husband should honour his commitment and not cheat on his spouse. It is better to divorce than be a cheater.

» Posted By Becca On 02.04.2013 @ 6:06 pm


Speaking is a capability that humans have. We take this for granted many times. Animals can’t speak words, but they do speak in their own ways. It is interesting how humans developed many different ways of speaking (different languages). How that came to be is a

» Posted By Becca On 01.26.2013 @ 6:44 pm


the river rushed forward, surging through the deep green forests. The trees were alive with the sounds of life, with birds twittering and tweeting, deers leaping to and fro. The occassional snap could be heard from distant hikers.

» Posted By Becca On 01.24.2013 @ 10:48 am


what is real…
are your feelings real
is our love real
do you realize how real you made my dreams feel
how you made real life better

» Posted By becca On 01.22.2013 @ 11:44 am


music driftung in the air as the sound of trees rustling in the breeze. the sound of the birds chipring so softly and the ocean breeze flowing. the gentle waves crashing down

» Posted By Becca On 01.18.2013 @ 4:52 pm

music driftung in the air as the sound of trees rustling in the breeze. the sound of the birds chipring so softly and the ocean breeze flowing. the gentle waves crashing down

» Posted By Becca On 01.18.2013 @ 4:52 pm


Politicians confuse me. they have been elected to the good of the people they represent…but in the US, they cannot get along. Growing up we have been taught to compromise and be flexible…but that seems to be so far beyond our politicians today.

» Posted By becca On 01.09.2013 @ 6:52 pm


Today is the day for living. In wake of tragedies it makes you reloze how importnat it is to live each day to the fullest. You need to not be complacent to the life you are living.

» Posted By Becca On 12.14.2012 @ 6:51 pm

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